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for Winter of the Heart

by pinktart1222

person thyladyx
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well the way I see it there are only two things to be done in this situation. The first is they could be very inventive with the lube and use it to give those trophies a very special shine. I mean can you imagine? "oh my Draco how did you get these trophies to shine so?" "oh you know good ole fashion elbow grease and Lube" Or they could use it the traditional way which isnt nearly as artistic or imaginative. Very nice chapter i look forward to more.
person thyladyx
schedule May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmm...its a bit early for me to say weather i really like this or not. Its shaping into something i could really love though. please keep up the good work.
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Can't wait to read more.
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A lot of one liners in your descriptions. I liked to see where you take this story.
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome plot to the story.
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see more!
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the story sound good so far can't wait to see where it goes.
person TCardan
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cute so far. Keep going:)
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 3!!! Poor Harry!!!
person thyladyx
schedule May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmm interesting start. By the Fallen do you perhaps mean the angels thrown from heaven after the great battle? I look forward to seeing more of this. I do hope your chapters get a little longer. I like long chapters...but not so long that we only get updates every other month. cany way cant wait to see more of this. keep up the geat work.