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Oh I don't know who to root for!! I want her to have them both! Is that an option? hint hint ;)

I think this is a fantastic story. I think Hermione has an impossible choice to make. I think you need to update again very soon! :-) Thank you, HG4eva

ARRRRGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!! I'm totally addicted!!! Ohhhhhh I don't think I can take waiting to find out where this is all leading!!!! Please please update soon!!! I fear I may literally keel over if there isn't more very soon!! *swoons slightly* :P you are amazing I beg you to find it in your heart to take pity on me and those like me and post another deliciously erotic and delectably tense chapter soon!!

Begging on my knees!

Luciussmistress

This story continues to fascinate me. I like the slower pace in developing their relationships and wonder what Severus is really wanting. I have a feeling Hermione's going to have a difficult but tasty task ahead. Glad to hear your spouse is better. Thanks.

Wow! I just discovered this story and so far I like it very much. Your characterizations of both Lucius and Hermione are great and I like the slow build up of their relationship. This addition of Snape to the story is interesting and I'm not entirely sure I like him here (although SS/HG is normally my OTP, I have developed a growing fondness for LM/HG as well). Can't wait to read more, hope to see the next chapter soon. :)

I'm keeping a close eye on this story. I like the pace of the story's development. What is Severus' motivation? When will Lucius make his intentions clearer? What will Hermione decide to do with the truth of who killed Voldy. Will Harry come clean with her at least? Or did Harry even see what Hermione & Ron saw? Wonderfully written and hugs to you and your beta. Thanks.

Wow, and I had such high hopes for Severus. But, no. He had to act like an unmitigated bastard. Sigh. I guess he and Lucius are far more enemies than friends. This doesn't bode well for poor Hermione getting some companionship out of Lucius, with Severus breathing down their necks. His trying to get closer to her after ranting like a lunatic was kind of creepy. I hope she's smart enough to stay away from the real master manipulator. Lucius may be good, but Severus was able to fool everyone on both sides for years. I can't wait for more!!! Thank you, HG4eva

The word that best describes this story is yummy. The sexual tension between Lucius and Hermione is thick enough to cut with a knife. I can't wait to see what happens.

I like that you are taking time to develop this story and not rushing to the smut. As lovely as I know it will be, it's always better for me with a slow build up with fully developed characters that I have connected with. It will be interesting to find out whose AK spell that partially hit Hermione, why Ron is so worried about the truth of who killed Voldemort, can Draco be helped and who did that to him, what is Hermione relationship to Severus if any,and would Voldemort have stayed dead if Harry's spell hadn't hit him also? Are you ignoring the prophecy and horcruxes entirely? If so, that's OK. I'm just wondering. See I'm fully of questions, which is good as I like a story that has me speculating. Oh, and I absolutely love a scheming Lucius. I think Hermione does, too.

Please update soon! This is great stuff! I hope they move beyond hand-holding quickly.