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by soldiersgirl0709

schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful tale. What a way to make Lucius seem so vulnerable and yet so strong. Seeing Hermione as the one who won't give and say sh loves him was very interesting to see. Me thinks a whole fic could be made from this one shot lol.

Any way, love the story, can't wait for you to post your longer ones


Lady Serin
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, truly intriguing take on a lumione relationship. I find it ironic that he becomes the hidden one in the paring, rather than him hiding her from his pureblood coterie. Of course, the lemons didn't hurt, either ;)
person circe266
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely, poignant story. Though I have a weakness for fluffy, romantic happy endings, I adore how you have depicted Lucius in this fic.

I would love to see a second chapter from Hermione's perspective.