rate_review Reviews

Hmm.. I really love this sequel so far, but isn't it a bit too one-sided? Harry seems to be the only one to truely struggle and change. All Draco has to do is let himself be guided by his assumptions of Harry, without ever knowing he had been wrong when his assumptions slowly turn to facts, when Harry himself changes to suit his perception. At least that's what I'm getting/guessing from the way Harry plays his role for Draco and how confused he gets at times. Shouldn't Draco change too? Shouldn't he face some sort of struggle instead of always believing he'll have the upper hand in the end and not caring one bit about anything? I just can't empathize with Draco's persona in this fic ; he's like a God or an unchanging variable Harry has to cope with when he is, in fact, quite human and complex.

Forgot about that idiot! Chapter 4 please!!!

about #3...

You gotta admit, Thalia IS honest about certain
situations. But, I kind of wonder about her
sometimes, if she has hidden intentions.

I have to say I enjoyed the little dance Harry
has engaged in with Draco, but he better be careful
or he'll wind up falling into Draco's 'spell', so
to speak.

and

FINALLY, we get a duel from you! I was wondering if
you'd ever do a scene with one again. I enjoy a duel
between them as much as seeing them duel together.
Though it was short...is writing a duel hard for you?

Love this story

Loved the latest chapter! can't wait to find out what happens next, either harry's gonna get caught in his plan, or he's gonna escape and then.... hmmm, well im gonna leave the twists to you,
keep writing awesome stuff XD

Would Draco different treatment on Harry cause jealousy?

Hm, true, Harry's lured, too... I wonder if either of them will really 'win' :D

Just wondering...is Harry sure about his plan? He is not another one that holds too high beliefs?

about #2...

WHAT THE HELL!!!???!!! How did you sneak not one but TWO
chapters by me??? After all the time I had haras...uhh..
ASKED about when you would post this. *sigh* Damn, I
must be slipping.

ANYway, I love the 'tit-for-tat' and game of tag you have
the both of them playing, it's almost like foreplay. :-)

By the way, I honestly LOVE a handsome & dangerous Harry,
well it gets MY blood going, don't know about you. :-p

Say, did you ever go to deviantart. com to see the pictures
your stories have inspired? I know of one artist who did a
picture based on your story 'Building with Worn Out Tools'.

It's a question of what do you type in the search engine, so
you won't have to go through 50+ pages of....Draco Malfoy
actually. If you type in 'Harry Potter' I don't know if
you'll come across it. Anyway, just thought I'd mention it.

I dearly hope this is not going in the direction I think it's going... That Harry fools Draco and then either kills him or arrests him or Draco notices Harry trying to fool him and does something stupid. I'd really hoped this would be one of the rare rare stories where Harry's succesfully turned to the dark, or in this case, to Draco. And I suspect Harry would have a lot better life with Draco than on his lonesome as an auror.

Anyways, you write very well, I like the Harry- and Draco-characters you've modified. And I like the magic-absorbion idea as well. I hope you'll update soon and if you have a mailing list of people who you tell about updates please add me to it. Happy spring and succesful writing.