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May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it seems as if harry has the advantage but there are subtle signs that he doesn't have the control he needs to get through this unscathed. however, if draco doesn't change his methods soon he may very well loose. i love that how there is no clear advantage it puts them closer to an egual footing. but the best part of this chapter was harry's willing step into darkness and that cool unaffected smile. i see my fangirl looming on the horizon. nothing like a good game of cat and mouse and hard to get with no clear roles to really make th blood boil. and it sings. i'm sorry got carried away. thanks for the reply. it makes sense knowing harry. til the next chapter. hitsuzen
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May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering will other Marked ones question the motive and action of Harry...
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May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5!!!
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May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #4....
I don't know what it is about this story, but it has a
certain.. I don't know..forbidden atmoshpere?
Very tense...I sometimes notice you do stories like
that but not often.
2. Is it just me, but have you seen the movie, Hellboy 2???
It's just the fighting style brought that to mind.
There was something else I wanted to ask, but...gotta go
to work. Maybe it'll hit me later.
I don't know what it is about this story, but it has a
certain.. I don't know..forbidden atmoshpere?
Very tense...I sometimes notice you do stories like
that but not often.
2. Is it just me, but have you seen the movie, Hellboy 2???
It's just the fighting style brought that to mind.
There was something else I wanted to ask, but...gotta go
to work. Maybe it'll hit me later.
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May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as always. I'm kinda liking Dark and Powerful Harry. I don't see too many well written fics with him featuring. I know you're busy but it would be the greatest thing ever if you could write a Harry/Draco fic with Dark Powerful Harry like how he is in Draco's dream and have Dark Draco desire him and they take over the wizarding world or something like that because that would be hot! LOL and with you writing it, it would be well written hotness! Just a thought. Update as soon as you can cuz I can't wait to see what happens next. Love it!
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May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm disappointed that no one is even looking for Harry. I would think someone would have missed him by now.
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May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah! And now there is a challenge for Draco. Splendid! I wonder how he will succeed though ; having a willing Harry by his side after enslaving him against his will? That's going to be veeery hard.
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May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
kyaa! i love this story about as much if not more than the first. the mix of emotions and desires as well as the misconspetions make this so much fun to read. there is a small part that can't wait for the result but for the most part i'm enjoying the journey to much. i agree with draco that this version of harry is very appealing minus the unecessary guilt. i think that thinking has been completely ingrained in him and ron and hermione weren't there to curb it. would i be correct in assuming that harry's guilt may be a method to keep his darker side from taking over. maybe a punishment to keep himself in check. sorry i've been gone so long. have u ever considered writing a book? ttyl!
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May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, totally looking forward to whatever you bring on :D
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May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Actually does Harry realize the unmistable attraction towards Draco? And when Draco's attraction, desire and feelings for Harry grow more, can he satisfy himself with having Harry because of his own Mark, but not of Harry's will and feelings in return? Does Draco trust others enought to have companiorship rather than control over people?