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i'm caught in limbo. i feel like there's been a power shift in draco's favor and i didn't expect it to come so soon. however, i don't think it's the significant one i think u're going to pull on us. i thank u for the surprise. it's fun having an author who can keep the reader on it's toes. i hate being able to easily predict an outcome. it makes the plot and significant moments less appealing. so thank you. til next time. keep up the suspense.

I wonder who does the maintenance work at Fox Valley. I just can't see any handymen in the bunch.

Just wondering when Draco confronts Harry with his darkness and his insane ways...how would Harry feel and defend himself? Thought I believe that would only fuel Draco's lust and desire more...

awesomeness.
thank you for writing.
*happy reader*

I think these two will tear each other apart. That sounds fun.

every time harry has to covince himself that he isn't attracted but acting makes me think he's lying to himself desperately. good job on the power play between the two. it still seems like harry has the upperhand because he seems to have pegged draco pretty well and draco seems to be clueless for the most part. am i wrong? also i have a feeling that in the last chapter of this segment harry is going to face a turning point that leans in dracos favor. maybe? anyways lurved this chapter. this is too much fun but it's a little agonizing in how slow any progress is being made. ur terribly evil at times. lol. ciao!

Let's review chapters 5 & 6 first...really Draco does play most of his cards, he seems to be in the lower hand...would he realize what he told later? BTW, now Harry realizes that it is lust and desire that drives Draco...would he change his plan?

Soooo need chapter 7!!! Will Draco find out about the spell?

I agree that most of the Dark Harry stories arent really plausible and I guess thats why there arent many good ones out there. But if anyone could write one it would be you. Even the little bit I see here is better than most. I guess for one to work it'd have to be totally AU. A girl can dream. LOL Anyway another great chapter. This fic is turning out to be one of my favs.. tho most of your stories are. Cant wait for next chapter.