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for Wolf in the Making

by Lomonaaeren

person Axel
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i hope there's a sequel ir summat... please???
person SP777
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about The End...

What!!! Is that the end??? And what a end it was! :-D

Boy, what a fool Draco was to NOT really realize that Harry
Potter is a force to be reckoned with...and now he's gone.

Onward Fox Hunt!!!
person k lave demo
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
not surprised in that aspect. i didn't expect u to end it this abruptly but i didn't anticipate draco really being in control just that he would have an advantage. i was wrong. thank you. i do love surprises and this has u written all over it. i'll hold u to that third story. btw was this in a way inspired by ur persephone oneshot (one of my all time favs). i loved harrys decision. he may not have won but he made sure that draco couldn't wallow in a total victory. til next time. ciao!
person polka dot
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Go Harry! if Draco comes for him he should be able to feel it through the mark and take a plane elsewhere.
person angelmuziq
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh a corrupted Harry.. how delightful LOL. As for Dark Harry killing Ron and Hermione, it is overused and since I rather like the both of them then I guess they would have to turn Dark as well or simply not be in the story I guess. Or if it was an AU then Ron and Hermione could be of a like mind to a Dark Harry. I just think its different. Its always hero Harry to save the day, a goody two shoes(even though I do like him being a hero). It would be nice to see something unique once in a while thats radically different from the norm. He wouldnt have to be Evil per se, just kinda like Snape and or Draco(especially the Draco in this story)- more Slytherin perhaps. Anyway awesome chapter as usual. Its late otherwise I'd catch up on your other chapters but its something to look forward to tomorrow. Keep up the spectacular work!
person andreea
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know, I'm wondering what happened to Malfoy's ties to England? What happened to his parents? I dont think Draco would completely abandon them, even in his quest for power.
person NightLo
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hum...if Harry cannot escape, how would he deal with his inner demons?
person angelmuziq
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It would be interesting to see a confrontation between Harry and Lisa once she finds out that Draco wants Harry on a more permanant basis. I wonder if she'd get jealous and do something... unwise. Great chapter. Update soon!
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 9!!!
person andrea
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loveing this story i adore draco