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for White Balloons

by KohakuShadow

schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is better than anything !!!!
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. I've never read Ron/Snape before, and I think you may have turned me into a fan! You have written a wonderfully well-crafted one shot. The length was perfect, as was the delivery. I really enjoyed your interpretation of both Ron and Severus' characters.
person Patrick
schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Terrific story. I love the bits about the sparkles and the broom idea.
person Proper T
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was Great! Loved it! For someone who doesn't write much Ron, you did a splendid job. :)
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I like love you. Seriously.
Incredibly inventive and cute :3
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
D: That was amazing!

Never in all my days did I think I would find myself /liking/ Snape/Ron but...but you devil you! Thats going to plague my mind now!

It was perfect, everything about it. I beyond loved their interactions and conversations, I was giggling like a school girl!

You've captivated me with this story. The woes in my heart right now, that this is only ever going to be a oneshot *sighs* But I suppose you gave us the perfect amount of story to leave our imaginations to do the rest. Still, though, I love your style of writing and how you can deeply express all Snape and Ron's emotions without ranting about them. Its addictive, therefore it causes me to long for more!

Guess I'll have to check into rehab though? ;)

Belated happy birthday to Starstruck86 and thanks so much for causing your friend to write this!

Commenting on your A/N now. I myself have never ever thought of Ron as sexy, in any way! I thought of him in exactly the same fashion as you. But /now/, thanks so much for altering my whole point of view completely!

Before I start to bore you, if I haven't already, thank you so much for posting this :) it really made my day!
person Viktoria
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
absolutely beautiful! Love Snape's unusually trusting and open nature but retaines his snarkyness! Perfect ending!
schedule May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very cute.Never really thought of Severus and Ron but you made it work. Great job.
person JanisJ
schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was great! I loved it. I bet starstruck loves it too! (lucky, lucky birthday girl) That was the perfect mix of sweet and sexy.... and at times, totally hilarious-- Well done!