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So amazing! i'm not that easily impressed, but this was really hot!

I don't know why it cut off my last review, but then I'll happily just make another one!
I love you man!!
This was an amazing chapter. I love it when Lucius is so thoughtfull, then somehow kinda selfish.. I love it! I just sat there thinking, c'mon.. c'mon do it already! i'm hungry for more too!
If just i was half as lucky as she is!
It was wonderfully written, just like the first chapter. And I'm still amazed by your skills!
Thanks so much mate! for dedicating it for my late birthday pressent! the best one ever! :)
Thanks for writing this! It was such a pleasure to read!

Another steamy story. I didn't like Lucius much, but this one changed my mind. Wonderful stuff.

Oh my, dearest God in heaven!

I have searched for someone who could write as you just did!
I read all your stories and I must say, of course, this is the best one! I am addicted to the elder slytherin's, most of all I do enjoy the rich skilled ones as Lucius, and of course a lovely dark haired potions master as dear Severus.
I would PAY you for making a story like this one again. For me, or something. I tell you. I have never been this satisfied in my entire life. I recommended it to all my friends and those who read it was completely satisfied with it.
For a longer story as most of all like this, I would be willing to pay you to make. If your interest and time is in for it too.
But I'd also DIE to see you write more with Severus as well.
How much can I possibly thank you for writing this!?
I could keep going with my compliments, but in the end, you would possibly get tired of it? haha
Dearest heart I love this, wonderful fanfiction. I'll wait in hunger for more.

So sad I discovered you claiming not making money on your stories.
So sad, but good for you to have standards.
You are more than welcome to write to my e-mail.
but hey, it's soon my b-day. I would die to pay you for such a gift! haha. Great, great work my dear!!

agrees with addicted to slytherin there. xDDD You should write more of this!!!! I LOVED IT huuuuge fan, huuuge fan!! :)

Ahhh.... now you've done it!!! I'm supposed to be cleaning and now I'm thoroughly distracted instead!! Very Slytherin, very seductive and very Lucius! Total yummydreamylustyhotness! (yeah, that's one big run-on descriptive word for ya!)

That was fabulous! Second person is hard to pull off, but in this case it worked beautifully. You kept to Lucius Malfoy's character and made for a deliciously tantalizing read! You are quite talented :)

My dear, you have great writing skills!
I loved the original way you wrote this fanfiction in the first person as a dialogue rather than a narrative. Very ingenious.

I love this fic! There are not enough great Lucius/OFC fics out there. Thanks!