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November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
These stories are so very interesting! Your writing style is different, and refreshing. I love how you don't need an abundance of dialogue to make each story wonderful. And the spin that you are writing Lucius' thoughts only adds excitement. Great work.
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July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. This... This is how Stine likes it. Female dominance. Makes a great chapter!
I love it! I absolutly do!!!
Though I'm kinda sad about the fact that it seems ...... finished?
I love it! I absolutly do!!!
Though I'm kinda sad about the fact that it seems ...... finished?
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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally! I had taken the time to finally read the chapter through, I missed reading this!
As always, Deares Michele, you have done an excellent job!
I was indeed feeling myself biting my lip when I read the whole 5th chapter over again, both the first half as you showed me before and then this breathtaking last path of the story! Thank you for writing this. Oh all the suggestions I have running through my head, but I will leave it up to you and wait excited for the next chapter!!
As always, Deares Michele, you have done an excellent job!
I was indeed feeling myself biting my lip when I read the whole 5th chapter over again, both the first half as you showed me before and then this breathtaking last path of the story! Thank you for writing this. Oh all the suggestions I have running through my head, but I will leave it up to you and wait excited for the next chapter!!
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can't believe that you ended this story without including the 'torture chamber'!?!?!?!?!
But, I must admit that the alley scene was HOT!
I will miss "Mr. Malfoy" and "dear hear" *sad sigh*
But, I must admit that the alley scene was HOT!
I will miss "Mr. Malfoy" and "dear hear" *sad sigh*
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January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gosh I love Lucius Malfoy! You wrote him well--kinda like an arrogant bastard but manipulative enough to play the role of being sweet.
I also love how he narrates likes he's talking to 'you' but he's really talking to the red head.
And you know, this is the first time I don't want Lucius to fall in love with the person he's taking advantage of. The smut is enough for me. Anything else, I feel, would ruin the story--but that's just my opinion. I personally can't wait to see what you do with the story.
Until your next chapter!
Love,hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18
I also love how he narrates likes he's talking to 'you' but he's really talking to the red head.
And you know, this is the first time I don't want Lucius to fall in love with the person he's taking advantage of. The smut is enough for me. Anything else, I feel, would ruin the story--but that's just my opinion. I personally can't wait to see what you do with the story.
Until your next chapter!
Love,hugs, and kisses
koolgirl18
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January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As always... Absolutly wonderful! It just keeps getting better and better! I could read these chapters forever.
I adore the fact that you put the quill and Mr. Malfoy's cane in focus in this one. Makes me get all full of ideas on how this could continue in the next chapter. I'm thinking, a naughty Belle haven't seen Lucius in months. He pays her a visit and catches her in an awful time, trying to pleasure herself, which he -of course- in fact wont be too happy about. He tries to play with her on her level, with her toys, til' she begs him to throw them away and make him fill her instead. That could be one way of showing dear Belle that the original is the best... Or something... haha! I'm getting so curious about what the next chapter is about! It just keeps getting better.
Also, I loved that you put Narcissa more into this chapter. Makes the reader oriented that, "Hey, he's still sneaking behind the pretty back of his wife."
Love it, adore it, ate it into my brain, what more can I say?
I adore the fact that you put the quill and Mr. Malfoy's cane in focus in this one. Makes me get all full of ideas on how this could continue in the next chapter. I'm thinking, a naughty Belle haven't seen Lucius in months. He pays her a visit and catches her in an awful time, trying to pleasure herself, which he -of course- in fact wont be too happy about. He tries to play with her on her level, with her toys, til' she begs him to throw them away and make him fill her instead. That could be one way of showing dear Belle that the original is the best... Or something... haha! I'm getting so curious about what the next chapter is about! It just keeps getting better.
Also, I loved that you put Narcissa more into this chapter. Makes the reader oriented that, "Hey, he's still sneaking behind the pretty back of his wife."
Love it, adore it, ate it into my brain, what more can I say?
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January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story with Lucius and his young "unnamed" Slytherin. It is always to hot and sexy.
And I love the part that the 'writting desk' plays in the latest chapter. Who knew furniture could be so sexy!?!?!?!?
And I love the part that the 'writting desk' plays in the latest chapter. Who knew furniture could be so sexy!?!?!?!?
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November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I, Love, you <3
I'm sure I enjoyed reading this as much as Lucius enjoied to bury him in her sweetness.
I feel so naughty after reading this chapter in class. But Oi, I enjoyed it so bad that I didn't even realize my teacher was talking to me. I was really getting into this chapter, I felt like I was in the scene! Your skills are amazing! I'll be looking forward to chapter 4 comming up once.
Thank you for keeping up the uploads!! I LOVE IT <3
I'm sure I enjoyed reading this as much as Lucius enjoied to bury him in her sweetness.
I feel so naughty after reading this chapter in class. But Oi, I enjoyed it so bad that I didn't even realize my teacher was talking to me. I was really getting into this chapter, I felt like I was in the scene! Your skills are amazing! I'll be looking forward to chapter 4 comming up once.
Thank you for keeping up the uploads!! I LOVE IT <3
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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful. Also, very hot and steamy...each and every chapter. Please let your readers know if you decide to add another chapter or maybe a sequel.
I love that we never know your OC's name. It adds to the mystery and eroticism.
My compliments to the author; I hope to read more from you.
I love that we never know your OC's name. It adds to the mystery and eroticism.
My compliments to the author; I hope to read more from you.
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I ... Love you, mate <3 ; ;
Oh my god, Lucius is such a teasing bastard in this one! I just sat there thinking: C'mon! C'mon! Do it already Lucius!
If just I were as lucky! I understand she saved herself for another dance with mr. Malfoy.
The oh so selfish lovely Mr. Malfoy.
I read this sooo slowly, enjoying it to the very last!
It was just as great as the first chapter! I'm still AMAZED by your writing skills.
This is the best birthday gift I've gotten for a few years, haha.
Simply amazing. I loved it!!
Thank you so much for dedicating this to me as well, haha.
Oh my god, Lucius is such a teasing bastard in this one! I just sat there thinking: C'mon! C'mon! Do it already Lucius!
If just I were as lucky! I understand she saved herself for another dance with mr. Malfoy.
The oh so selfish lovely Mr. Malfoy.
I read this sooo slowly, enjoying it to the very last!
It was just as great as the first chapter! I'm still AMAZED by your writing skills.
This is the best birthday gift I've gotten for a few years, haha.
Simply amazing. I loved it!!
Thank you so much for dedicating this to me as well, haha.