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Thank you, thank you, thank you! I love extra updates. Why is Sirius holding back? He must know that by keeping everything from Hermione its going to wind up biting him in the ass. She on the otherhand can't be happy in the relationship she has with Bill. She seems to be keeping it so compartamentalized that if it were to end she wouldn't end up hurt. Can't wait for the next update. Well done!!!

I can't imagine why you don't have more reviews. I sat down and read all 10 chapters in one go and I am loving it. The whole triangle between Bill Hermione and Sirius is unique because it also involves Remus who has slept with two of the four involved. It truely is a mind bender. My only complaint is that the updateing comes around once or twice a week. I know there are other things to life other than fanfiction but the story is pretty darn good. Until next time...well done!!!

Hey there mariteri! I am really enjoying your story and I love the Review Sing Along! I don't get time to review as much as I'd like (I have to sneak in the illicit pleasure of reading fanfiction whenever I can!) but I enjoy the challenge of your game heaps!

As for the story, can't help you with writing male masturbatory scenes (never witnessed one and I'm a girl!) but I think you did it just fine. Love the plot and keep up the good work!)

*leaves cookies and hot chocolate*

This is another great fic. I just found it today when I logged on. Sorry I have not been able to keep up, but real life is killing me. I think what I like most about your fics is that I cannot figure out where it is going or what the characters are going to do or how they will react. The suspense is freaking fantastic. As far as your sing alongs....they are just too hard. Your music range is more broad than mine apparently. I mean, I listen to a lot of music, but I just don't recognize some of these. Anyway, I love this fic and now that I have caught up, I cannot wait to see what happens next

MMerrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???!??!!??!!??!???!??!??!?? Don't take away the sing-a-longs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anyway, you are doing great so far. I loved the interaction between Hermione and Lucius, and the library scene. You might want to go read some of the solo scenes that other writers write, just for some ideas. petalsoft, softobsidian74, ms_figg, and snapes-goddess are really good at sex scenes. In petalsoft's what a witch needs is a really great scene where Harry is discussing the art of playing with pussy, equating it with eating a peach. Really funny, especially when McGonagall walks in on them.........anyway.......have a great day.....

hello,

I know I'm a terrible fan for not reviewing before. My advice for the male wank scene is to either a) watch a dude wank and take some notes about it to figure out how you'd describe what's going on or b) find a friend and help him out (if you're so inclined). I wrote 3 stories to get beta rights and when it came to the smut, I enlisted the help of my lovely spouse. After 30 seconds of looking at me as if I were nuts when I explained how I wanted his help, he got ahold of my hand and yanked me into the bedroom and really took up the idea of being my research buddy. It's all in the name of art, I tell you!

Good luck and thanks for sharing,
Jillian

While '80's punk was not big with me, since I was a very little girl at the time, American Waste I do remember, even though I did have to look up the group. Black Flag, by the way....I don't think it was so much that the lead singer died as to the fact that the group had the same name as a roach killer......I wouldn't want to be named after a bug spray, would you?

Yes I do like dark roasts, early in the morning. Nice and strong it get the blood pumping and flowing nicely, but only one cup, thank you....any more than that and you would have a very hyper woman on your hands.........

Please have Bill come clean with Hermione soon....she needs to know the truth and get on with Sirius. Remus needs his ass kicked for cheating on Tonks....is Teddy there yet, or have you decided not to have him even be born in this story? I don't remember you saying whither or not Fleur and Bill had Victorie or not, but if they did, who has custody of her?

Yes! We have no bananas! written by Frank Silver and Irving Cohn; I'm sorry to say that I couldn't find an actual rendition of this to listen to. I can't believe this was written in 1923. It's funny.

By the way, I love my coffee two ways; either very fresh and black, or if it has sat a bit 3 creams/3 sugars. unless you use those lovely flavored creamers. Cinnamon and Irish Cream mixed is really good.

More story, please. I am patiently waiting for a little more....action...I think.

OOOHHHHHHHHHHH more chocolate!!!!!!!!!! Nummies!!!!!!!!!!

Oh...ummmm... the Sing-a-long.....right...that would be The Little Things by Danny Elfman.

Right, so Hermione is with Bill at the moment...okaaaaaaaay...so when is Sirius factoring in? Or are we gonna have a threesome going on???? I'm all for the more lovin' and I love Bill...and Sirius...oh..and Blaise, just for your information....hope he's ok...I'd hate to loose such a great character as him....

Morning After Dark by Timbaland. By the way, I loved the brownies...they really hit the spot.*licking crumbs off the plate* You have no idea how I have been craving them lately.(smacking lips together)I must say, though, that this story is not flowing as easily as others you have written. The chapters are not as long and I must say, not as fast paced as some of your other stories. This one seems to be giving you trouble. Kick its ass and get the words flowing again. I still like the plot line, but its slow right now. I love the relationship between Draco and Hermione. They seem to be comfortable together. More Hermione/Sirius getting serious please.