rate_review Reviews

I love a good HG/SB pairing. One thing that I especially enjoyed about this story is how you wrote Hermione's character. Smart and funny, tough but vulnerable. This was very well done.

Although it fit with the story perfectly, it was a bit of a bummer to read a weak and self-absorbed Remus. Usually, he is one of my favorite characters. However, it fit this storyline perfectly, so I'll forgive you this time. ;-)

Seriously, I enjoyed your writing very much. Yet again. Keep up the great work!

oh, but one use of the plume, to reverse Hermione's infertility would be a lovely thank you to her for keeping it safe.
Great story, brilliant use of Remus....

That was just so wrong...to have Hermione find out like that, but you got to admit, she wouldn't have believed it unless she saw it......so I guess it was for the best.....great hex, by the way. I hope Sirius lets things cool down before he makes a go at Hermione....everyone would think he was taking advantage of her if they started too soon after the very public break-up......

You're welcome on the quote. thanks for the cookies and coffee.......such a brilliant combination....

more please, of everything................

Thanks for the bonus it was a nice surprise. I love that your not taking the Sirius Hermione relationship so fast. You have a very nice build up going on. It will eventually make the mutual attraction all the more real. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!

I love this story, brilliant and intriguing. Makes me want more..... :)

Well,

I'm glad Hermione realized that she didn't love Bill and got a bit of payback in to boot! Poor Sirius, he needs to piss or get offa the pot, you know? Where's his lionheart? Woo the woman! He's pretty good at it, you know : )

Thanks for the quick update, and as someone who gave you advice on "ringing the snake" you're very welcome.

Jillian

Love it! That was great. I hope there is more angst coming their way. I'm just a abit confused. I got the impression that Tonks disliked Hermione for her involvment with Remus yet she morphed into Hermione for her lovers. Maybe I just misunderstood and need to reread a few chapters. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!

you know, we have a saying where i'm from that goes like this "don't shit where you eat." Did remus and bill just think that they could go on forever playing that game? I do feel a tad bit bad for Tonk except that she knew that it wasn't Hermione's fault for the sex she'd had with REmus, but took it out on Hermione anyway. I'm curious to see the outcome from Sirius spilling the beans. I can't see Harry siding with Remus and Bill on this one. Perhaps Hermione should contact Flur directly? They apparently have A LOT in common and she might know or be able to say something that her dad can't. Oh and one can say a lot without saying anything. Hermione could gain a lot of information by just presenting her finding to the ex-father-in-law of her ex-lover (what a way to prove relation. Now if only we could find the other 4 ways to Kevin Bacon from there!). Thanks for the quick update.

Jillian

Wow....I knew about Remus and Bill from a previous chapter, but had NO IDEA about Tonks. I loved how she dealt with it and that you used the situation to segue into HG/SB. Clever, very, very, very, clever. I cannot wait until the next update.

To Fanny Brawne, 13 October 1819





Recipient: Fanny Brawne (1800-1865) was first Keats's neighbor and later his fianc