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Klasse Geschichte gibt es eine Fortsetzung bin gespannt. 

Machst du noch mehr solcher Geschichte mit Harry und ihm?

 

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Sequel PLEASE!! >.< ♥ (Alert me if you put one up please?)

That was so great you should diffently do a sequal!

first get a bata. the idea is cute but all the spelling typos were distracting and yes, the stoic Sess was rather ooc.

Yes please, have a sequel!

I want to sesshy beat vernon to a pulp and kick Ron's ass!

Please post another chappy soon!!

No 'squeal' (I think you mean sequel), please. There are so many things wrong with this story. The main problem though it's you're writing several chapters (and weeks and months) worth of growth into one chapter and one night. This story isn't even remotely realistic, and not just because Sesshoumaru is so out of character that you might as well just give him another name and make him an OC. Also, since when are Sesshoumaru's (Sesshoumaru who lives in Japan) lands right next to Hogwarts (in Scotland)? Honestly, it's written so immaturely that I wonder if you're even old enough to actually be on this site. Add that to the fact that you could strongly use a beta and there are just too many things wrong with this story, and unfortunately most of other reviewers are too simple-minded to tell. You should work first on improving this before you even think about writing a sequel.

And can I just add, Sesshy? Really? You seriously think he would anyone to call him Sesshy? He loves Rin and she still calls him Sesshoumaru-sama.

yes continue this please! Sequil! thank you

please make a sequel so we can find out what happens when sesshy takes harry back to the western lands. nice fic

OMG! This is a wonderful first chapter. It was angsty, romantic, sweet and HOT at the same time. I hope there's another chapter, if there isn't thank you for posting this little gem.