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for It Was Supposed to be Over

by nmos

schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An intriguing plot! Snape returned as a ghost? I think he has many things yet to live for, and he just wouldn't admit it! HAH! Ah well, I'm getting into it. I hope you post more of it soon!!
person alina290
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like her thoughts on what she should start to do. I hope that Snape will change his mind about staying alive once she brings him back. I know I am getting ahead of myself, but that is how it is sounding to me. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you for this one.
Liz
person use2b2t2
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yea! an update. I admiot that I'm very intrigued with this story. There are so few ghost Severus stories. You have started this very well.

Mare
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice setup chapter. I like the details of his house and library, as well as the further character development you have included. Also, thank you for the response; I wasn't expecting you to mention my question directly! Is anyone going to be missing Hermione while she's researching for Snape? I would think she would need to contact someone and let them know she's all right and no rogue survivors have harmed her.
person alina290
schedule May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this very much so far. I do love good Severus/Hermione pairing. I did not think that Resurrecting him would be an option though. I look forward to the next chapter.
Liz
schedule May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I didn't. Just something about your tone in the A/N at the start of the story gave me the impression that other sites may not have been as welcoming as they perhaps should have been. Your Snape is very nearly canon, and that is quite refreshing, I must say. Will we ever find out how he became a ghost? According to Sir Nicholas it was because he was afraid of dying, but Snape was welcoming it. Just curious.
person Angie30
schedule May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic,keep going. :)
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story is not horrible. So don't think that anymore. It's a very good beginning and well written. I am very interested to see where it will go. Thanks.
person amd2175
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing please!!! This is very interesting!
person alina290
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have not a story like yours yet so this is my first ghost type story. I hope you will update soon. Looking forward to see how Snape manifests himself to Hermione.
Liz