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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story. I pray you continue it! I love the romantic atmosphere of Italy and the fact that Draco and Hermione happen to be staying in the same hotel. Continue this!!
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August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i will beta for you if you like im not brittish im canadian but i have a friend who is brittish so i can get the slang and im good with grammar and spelling for the most part email me if you are interested keepsake101@hotmail.com
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August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is really sweet. I'm enjoying it. Also, I didn't see any glaring mistakes or typos that would detract from the story, so don't worry about getting a beta. You're doing a great job on your own. The only thing that I would encourage you to do that would make the story even more interesting, would be adding more detail and/or information within the character's thoughts and emotions. Just fill it out a bit more ^_^
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August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
interesting story, hope for an update soon!
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
as well written as that was, there's just one detail I have to correct:
Madame Pomfrey was not a professor, she was just the school nurse
Madame Pomfrey was not a professor, she was just the school nurse
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying the story so far, and do hope that it ends up a Draco/Hermione story not a Blaise/Hermione story! Also interesting that you had her have a thing for Dean and that Ron and Lavender were longtime boyfriend/girlfriend. Anyways, good so far, and can't wait for updates so I can see what happens at the Ball. Perhaps a little Draco/Hermione interaction please! :-) So in short, very much looking forward to an update and I'm really liking your story so far!
-A Mere Reader
-A Mere Reader
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April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Draco is so cute when he apologizes, well....... let's see.......... scenary love it, out of London for a change is very good, Blaise as a friend, and possibly more..........yes!!!! Just wishful thinking I love the triad between Draco/Hermione/Blaise. But you got my attention now. So go back to your computer we need the following chapter or better yet chapters.......so run along you got work to do.........
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April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An interesting and intriguing beginning. I look forward to more very soon. Thank you, HG4eva
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April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thumps up up up up... LOL