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by thepretender501

schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you did very well

re-invigorated my love of gingers!
person Monkey Lady
schedule May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. It's a cute first time story. Not over the top, simple and endearing. I also thought it was funny that Hermione was just like "whatever, I just watched my two best friends have anal sex, how cute and totally predictable! I told them so they'd be prefect together." Nice. :) I've read a few of your stories and enjoy them. Thanks for sharing them.
person sanda
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good story
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwwh, that was really very sweet. All tentative and fumbling and very much like them, so yes, I'd say you did them brilliant justice!

... More plz? ;)
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it :) Very good job.
I'm a fan of your work too love it all. I think this has the potential to be a story