rate_review Reviews

isn't it just sooo sweeeeet :)

It's a very bittersweet little story. Filled with both sadness and hope.

I have to say though that there are quite a few spelling and grammar errors. For example Hermione had the gull to look guiltily at Harry - I think you mean gall not gull. Some of your paragraph's are also extremely long, making them harder to read. If you had someone beta this it would make a good story better.