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I know you said this would only be 3 chapters but I think your cutting it short. This has a huge possibility to be much more. There could be some angst and drama within all the characters pasts alone. Of course you are the author and we must take what we can get (sigh). thanks for the quick update and well done!!!!

Okay first off my two criticisms. In chapter one you wrote Hermione was in the Three Broomsticks, but then Sirius waved Tom over. Tom's the Barkeep of the Leaky Cauldron, Rosmerta (if that's spelt right) is the barkeep of 3 Broomsticks. Secondly when Hermione was talking to Remus she said brake up with Ron where is should have been break.

Apart from that cool. Me likey :) I guess Remus' true mate is Hermione? She does seem rather comfortable with him. I liked the fact you brought up Ginny seeing Hermione as a threat, it just shows that she's not as confident as she always puts across. Interesting to have Tonks and Shaklebolt together.

Had an absolute giggle fest at the Sirius trying to convince Hermione to let him play matchmaker. Looking forward to the next one and hope you get more reviews.

Fun story so far, and I see interesting thing happening. I really am enjoying it so far. Thank you.