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This certainly was short and sweet, but it could have used a little more..... anyway, try some Evanescence, Prince, a little country, Dido, Metallica, or even Garth Brooks' alter ego Chris Gaines. Unless anyone really was into Garth and knew of the oopsie he did by doing Chris, you should challenge some people with that one. I think you might find Chris Gaines on iTunes.

I love your stories and can't wait for more....

You know what I liked about this last chapter? Two things, the fact that sex wasn't needed the moment they found each other and the way Sirius had a go at Ginny. The little redhead came off as being a little self involved.

Nice, short and sweet. With just enough funny moments to give me a good chuckle. There weren't any errors that leapt out to me in the last chapter. I will definitely be reading more of your work. :)

I'll put my reviewing hat on for you! :) I love it so far! Sirius giving relationship advice...hilarious! I think the banter in the first chapter is excellent and I sense the very possessive nature of Remus coming out in full force, Yay! And please no politics..... :)

An ephinpy can be a wonderful thing, and I agree it allows the writer to get to a feeling or an emotion without having to spend page and pages describing every little thing. It also seems to work well for me when a character finally realizes something that I've seen for ages (like the fact Ron and Hermonie are a complete mismatch). I like how your developing her friendships and I look forward to seeing where it develops from here. Sorry your having trouble getting reviews. It's a shame when really well written and interesting stuff isn't given the respect and recognition it deserves. Thanks, and I hope you don't lose heart.

This is a very interesting story. It has much potential and I hope you continue it. Ha ha and yes, epiphanies are awesome ;)

It's really good. I like this story a lot. Great job.

love that they don't realize how much just the way they interact speaks for them...

I love Remus/Hermione stories, and yours is off to a good start! Nice use of humor in the first chapter, with Hermione's crappy date and Lavender's clinginess. Looking forward to reading how you bring Remus & Hermione together -- is 3 chapters enough??? (not enough for me, especially when you're the author!)

I'm loving your story! I love the Hermione/Remus pairing and you're writing it spot on. Thank you for the emotional baggage that they carry (Ron and Tonks)and I like the way they find comfort in each other after their crappy days. It's shaping up to be a great story; I only wish you hadn't said that it would be really short!

PS: Sirius is just wonderful!

Great story so far. Cant wait for these 2 to get together.....an Sirius as a matchmaker.....rofl! cant wait for an update