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Chapter 6

Harry doesn

Chapter 7

Oooh yes, Harry definitely wants to punish Ginny. He canes her without mercy. Yet Tom didn

Chapter 1

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Chapter 2

I think your dialogue at the party is great! Rita Skeeter reminds me a vulture, hovering around trying to pick up scraps. Harry seems distracted, like he isn

OMFG. This is dark and disturbing and exceptionally well written. I just love your dialogues!!!

Oh good Lord, where are you taking this. Ginny is doing very dark dark things. I can't believe she went to Knockturn to make this happen, but you describe her longing and need very well, so I guess I do get it afterall. The first part of this chapter had me in stitches. Very amusing, the interactions between Ron, Harry and Hermione. LOL@Hermione talking to Harry about dominating a woman and Ron spilling the beans about their sex life. It all seems so "them", very natural, and that's one of the best things about this story. You're exploring some really dark and provocative stuff but the characters and interactions feel so Harry Potter. Just brilliant. I hope Skeeter gets what's coming to her, and that Ginny doesn't get hurt too badly by her own design. Can't wait to see what's next...

I'm fucking speechless here...that was just...I have no words. I don't know how you made this very very dark chapter sexy but you did. I mean parts of it were just cringe worthy (not the writing, the acts depicted), but at the same time, there was this dark underlying sensuality to it, and I think it was all coming from Ginny and her desire for this, even as she fought against it. Just wow. And that she knew that it might kill her and had accepted it and submission to it is just beyond words. I hope she gets a hold of this or get a really good dom who will know how to give her what she needs in a more healthy way. God let it be Harry! And yay to Harry...I'm still a little confused about how he resisted the Imperius but that was an awesome scene. I hope he puts that jerk out of business and in prison for allowing that to happen. I can only imagine how traumatized Harry will be though after walking in on seeing "Tom" and Ginny like that. This is just fascinating!

Oh, I loved the tension and it was running throughout the entire chapter. First Ginny's refusal to tell Harry about the Boggart and then after he got rid of it, I can only imagine the awkwardness. I loved the way how you showed Harry examining her clinically. Why was that sexy to me? Perhaps because he was taking note of everything, maybe he'll even store it away for the future? :D I'm such a perv. I loved how Hermione picked up that things weren't quite right and I'm glad that he's close enough to her to confess what happened. His anger is definitely justified, but I understand what's going on with Ginny too. How terribly confusing for both of them. I'm scared and excited about this conversation that he has to have with Ginny. Off to read the next!

OMFG! Julian!!! You have to write many many many more stories. Your BDSM presses ALL of my buttons. I had to stop several times while reading this to collect myself. So fucking hot. Everything from the time Harry stood up and told Ginny he wanted her on her knees in pain to him making her crawl, to his verbal humiliation. Gawd! This is so damned hot! And I can't believe how you've incorporated Hermione into this story...it's freakin' crazy but very believable. I totally gasped when Hermione directed Ginny to the kitchen and told her Harry wouldn't agree to a safe word. lol. She is way too involved but at the same time I'm glad she is. And I was LOL@her getting flustered about Harry and Ginny being naked. I wonder if she's going to get off to it, and if that will change anything. I hope you're working on more chapters or a sequel! I LOVE this!

Whoah, a lot of that was unexpected. I'm still a bit in shock at how quickly it turned from a sex scene to a battle for Harry's soul. The thing with Hermione was just heartbreaking...she's going to kick his ass if she gets down. lol. I thought for a moment you were going to kill either Harry or Ginny. So I'm glad you didn't. Very interesting turn of events. Sorta painful to read, but only because it seemed so close to the characters and the struggles they're grappling with. I really can't wait to read the epilogue. Thanks for sharing such a different and intriguing and HOT story :)