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for Break Me Down

by KendalPotterMalfoy

schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OHH!! i wanna see how draco reacts!!!
NO FAIR not a nice clifffyy!
:P
<3!
love it so far cant wait for more!
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh tell me you are still writing this I want to see where you take it.
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amber should have another eye color in my opinion. Harry's eye color will seem less special if others have it too... maybe amber eyes, lol. but i like this story... it's interesting a bit.
person Elvira
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is Theo getting Hermione?

Poor Hary? Are the dads going to be different fathers for each of same? Hmmmm...How is Draco going to react? I hope Severus isn't mean here!

Update soon!!
person Elphaba
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Sorry no time to review longer one next time!
person Juana13
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I feel really bad for Harry for being raped, and now he's preggers!!! I'm glad he's so happy though. :)
so when does Draco enter this story, hmm??
can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry!!! How awful!!!
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good for a first go at this. Excellent teaser first chapter.
Don't make us wait long for more.
person Elphaba
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I Like it, poor Harry
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Looks like its going to be a great story! I eagerly await your next update.