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by thepretender501

schedule November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, I feel shredded after that. So wonderfully written!
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. I do like when Harry is the initiator in a story. ****!
schedule April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry!!!
person Zoomi
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
During the whole fic all I could think was "Fuck, fuck, FUCK!" And not because they were fucking. The absolute angst of it all was very heart breaking. As much as I hate to admit it, if Harry and Draco really were "together" I imagine this would be the only way. I swear I could almost feel Harry's desperate love for Draco, and it was just brilliant how you took away meaning from "I love you" when Draco said it. And seriously, I almost thought Harry was going to throw himself off the tower since he was hurting so much, then Draco found him and the cycle continued. You did an awesome job, and I love this fic. Definitely going to keep the link somewhere so I can reread it when I need a bit of angst. :D
person yaoiObsessed
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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wow, that really hurt....
and that says alot!!! Wow, so much angst. It's so sad. I'm surprised Harry hadn't killed himself. I was expecting that to be the ending. Glad you didn't. Still. does this mean that Draco does love harry? in some sort of dark, twisted way?
I cried for Harry. I feel so bad for him. He's so in love, and all he's in is pain....
Very good job. I really loved your writing, even as i Hate the dark h/d itself.
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It was very depresing, you almost made hate Draco... Almost!! Loved it regardless.
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel raw after reading that. I am definitely not a fan of a lot of angst and abuse, but the way it was written...I kind of liked it in a very masochistic way.
Harry flinging the covers and the aftermath...heart-wrenching, beautiful. Neither one can resist the other. Kind of have to wonder if Draco is being so abusive, because he resents the control/pull Harry has of him and lashes out for needing him. (don't want to think of the possibility that Draco truly is that coldblooded)

person Dadella
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I read this before realizing it was you (IT'S ALWAYS BEEN YOU! ^.^)
I loved it (as always). The CONCEPT might have been slightly cliched (but really, not enough people actually go through with it) and you did it really well... I actually wouldn't mind seeing a little more into this, like if you expanded teh story, or showed us Draco's point of view in it or SOMETHING... (but that's just my twisted way of begging for more work from you to read...)