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for A Grim Return

by choena

schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel a bit sad that he's reliant on their magic but if he's good with it that's fine. so, finally the end and my this took a while. Well done on finishing it (it irks the hell out of me when writers just leave a story hang). good luck with your exams.
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about time two. sev and siri have been dancing around there feelings for two long. it does have the feel of nearing conclusion in the air doesn't it.
person grugster
schedule September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful. I like the way you write the characters. Please update soon.
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
found this story quite a while back and then got out of reading hp fic for several months. i'm really enjoying what you've got so far, and i think you did quite well with the threesome scene. can't wait to see more of this, watch how the guys work past all their issues. keep up the great work :)
schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it wasn't that bad...besides bonding is tiring. i'd konk out too. good luck with the move. i hope things go ssmoothly.
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
grins
you're welcome.
Woah, I thought it was the bitchs that went into heat? Still,with magical accident, trapped in his animal form siri, who's to say how it effects him.
person MrE-Quecky
schedule July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved this very much :D
schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Man its tough getting Sev to come around but it looks like it's finally happening which is good cause it sounds like Siri is running out of time.
person Yenpham0
schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
VERY LOVELY!!!
person grugster
schedule May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and I love you for making it a ss/lm/sb.