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for One Summer Afternoon

by megadeth425

schedule January 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

nice story I do like incest stories

I like that he rushes to bathroom because he got a hardon on his sister and trying to hind it funny

good job, like handjob

person LiB
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The use of language to describe ginny was fantastic, I haven't read such a good incestuous story (Especially a Harry Potter one) in a fair while, you recieve full rating for this! Thank you muchly.
person horatius314
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
when do you plan on witing chapter 2 of this?
person horatius314
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Excellent pacing, worthwhile dialog, good imagery. Excellent story. Failing to continue with this would be a crime.
person Astender
schedule May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you're going to continue? I love Ron/Ginny and can't wait for the next chap!
person a fan
schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! There aren't enough Ron/Ginny fics!
person Kortir
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh thank you thank you thank you sooooooo much :D I always love R/G as a incest-loli pairing. So great, and wonderfully written. I'm definitely hoping for 2nd chapter with anal if you're up for it...

I'm not sure if I suggested or not... if you ever have a chance I'd love to see an Ichigo Mashimaro loli pairing. Just a thought :)
person pettrum
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was good - are you going to continue it?
person DarQuing
schedule April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, please tell me you're going to write more? That was very hot. :D
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! I hope this isn't just a one-shot!