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for Beltane - Pt 2

by alecto

schedule October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mmm - wonderful! As always, your spot-on characterisation, details, atmosphere & description - just wonderful! Love your moment to moment perception and characters' self-awareness and conflicted emotions in all of your stories, and loved Lucius & Luna together in the Beltane revelry, and dare I write - a 'gentler' Lucius, but then, Luna would/could bring that out of him...lovely work!
person xxxanity
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Both of these stories are so good... and hot. It sounds weird, but I love how you describe hair. Lucius requires sexy hair writing.
person ladyhera
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing adn intense. I would like to know if anything else would happen between them ? I really enjoyed how you put these two characters together. There are so few of Lucius/Luna. I kind of find the pairing cute despite the age difference. Thank you!
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this one. You portrayed both of them very well.

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