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for The Phoenix Ashe Cafe

by Digitallace

person Kasey
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved this! And I LOVED the whole idea of raw magic flowing into his food. The way you did it still made it were Harry's talent for cooking wasn't altered by magic but just how people felt when they ate it! Very amazing idea :) Your a very talented and bright writter :) I have a feeling that you will do great things. :) Very great story. Sucks that it is over but love the way you ended it :) Good job! :) -- Kasey Michelle
person kittycat30
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story! From bitchy Pansy to chocolate naughtiness - this was delicious to read!!!
person lazybean
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg that was soooooo good just eeeeeeeeee threating someone with love now thats the way to do it lol geez it was just so good i kinda wish it wasn't over
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved the story,the magic food sounds a lot like the movie Simply Irresistible with Sarah Michelle Gellar, is that were you got the idea from? But anyways love the story.
person Kasey Michelle
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this. I really am! Its soooo good. I cant even describe how much I love this. It is so different and so very good. I cant wai for the next part of this! More when you can :) -- Kasey Michelle
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loveeeeee this... and those dessert names are awesome... ggood job.. pls update soon
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this!! ^_^ and the box of sweets i'm now going to go buy and devour. ^_^
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo why did Harry push him away...it was going so well for Draco there. I do like how Draco managed to insinuate himself into Harry's life, however. He'd make a fabulously sexy maitre'd.

By the way, pear and goat cheese tarts are absolutely delicious. I make mine with a young chevre and puff pastry. Can't wait to see what name Harry picks for the new dessert. Hopefully something that nods to his new employee and make-out-buddy :)

Glad to see you writing again, by the way. I got very excited when I realized it was you! Now go write the third chapter and fix the story. Please?
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The sweetness of the kiss, the tart...delicious. I like that it is a subtle seduction and that Draco is actually working hard for it (finding his own fulfillment on the way?)
...great, now I 'm hungry:)
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really don't like reading about food cause it makes me want it. lol love the story so far can't wait for more,