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March 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Great story but you should have gone a little further maybe him telling about his kids on the way but i like that seen maybe point out him not going to get that ingradiant but going on his honeymoon just a little something but that would be a good sequel
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June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a fun and sweet take on an old story. Thank you for freshening it up for me. :-) Please write another story again soon, okay? Thank you! HG4eva
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brillint version of a great plot, I liked that you had Severus parents alive and that he aknowlegded the friendship he had from the other Professors, very well done.
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May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yea! Another chapter! I look forward to the next when. I am enjoying your prose.
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May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I seem to have missed the last 3 updates, so I was thrilled to see them today! Thank you for such a sweet story. Winter, spring, summer or fall, this story rocks! More soon please, HG4eva
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May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you decided to revisit the Severus/Hermione pairing. I love the way you write him, and this is truly one of your best stories yet. It's very polished, has great flow and really shows how you've grown as an author. Look forward to more.
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is such a change from your usual stories. The plot movement is tighter, probably due to the three ghosts structure. So far, I think this is your best story. The last part is going to be hard to do--trying not to get too sappy while not dragging it out too much or making it unfulfilling.
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very poignant and about the only way he would be able to see his own impact on the lives around him. After all, he spent most of his life in a guilty search for veangeance as well as the isolation needed to focus on his task.
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April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't yell at you; this is too cute to do that to you. lol I am really enjoying and you are doing it well. Thank you! HG4eva
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April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot. It is keeping within both the original story and representing the influence of the HP Caeactors. I can't wait for the next update
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