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for Princes in Exile

by LiteraryBeauty

schedule December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely brilliant. Great grammar, spelling, fabulous plot, and amazing humor. The use of double entendre for humor and plot building is astoundingly clever and couldn
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to tell you that I am absolutely DISGUSTED by the way you're story has taken up ALL of my attention for FIVE CONSECUTIVE DAYS! Even to the point where my boyfriend has had to sacrifice large chunks of my time to this story because it is just THAT good! It's beleivable, written incredibly well, hardly any spelling mistakes and completely MIND consuming. Conragulations to you both on such a well matched collaboration. I LOVE Draco!!! My only apolagy is that I didn't reveiw you're story all the way along but unfortunately I devoted so much time to reading that there was never any time left to reveiw before going to work, bed, dinner etc. Thank You, Thank You, Thank You and please please write again soon! X x

*Eowyns Elixure
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so sad that this over. But it was so awesome. The scene where Draco Petrified Harry and he left, I was actually saying OUT LOUD "It was an accident! He didn't mean it!" XD Really well done, beautifully characterised and utterly believable. I absolutely loved it.
person Ems-the-word
schedule October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are both amazing authers! You work so well together and this story was as enjoyable from the beginning to the end. You've earned yourselves another fan and another high rating.
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hm, I wonder if a person like Lucius would really just read one newspaper exclusively, that seems very weird... But whatever :D
A harsh world, where the whole family is persecuted for the deeds of one member...
Ah, I'm rembling, loved the story, loved tihs chapter, loved the ending :D
person SP777
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about 28...

Whoa...did Lucius Malfoy say 'attack of the vapors"???
I didn't realize he knew such slang! :-)

All in all, it was a good story and I enjoyed it!
person I_Will_Change_the_World
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Wizard God. I loved that! I hate to see the story end! Please do a oneshot sequel or something. I totally had a fangirl squee moment when they kissed at the end. Drarry forever!
person mariahs_fantasy
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was a beautifully well-written story. And i like happy endings, but try to be more realistic about them, not so cliche-ridden. Other than that, awesome story, truly! :)
schedule October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's Thursday, and this story hasn't been updated this week. I've been checking this site at least twice a day since Monday afternoon. Pretty please update? Or at least let us know what horrible thing has befallen you!
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Um... I read this in one day. I love it! But it's not finished, is it?