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for A Promise

by blossomingart

schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This makes me so sad! ;-;
I hope you update soon!! =D
schedule April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Em, Gee. i kinda hate you right now, dear. :P Why do that to poor Harry? And then the *dream*? Jeeze. Torture the poor boy, why don't ya?

Great story. i want more. :)

rivka.
person fayerose
schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I adore your writing.
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, this made me cry. I love it! It's so sad. :(
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story is so emotional. I can literally feel Harry's pain. You describe it so well. You also describe their joy and relationship so well that it accentuates the pain, makes it tangible. I must admit I actually shed a tear or two for Harry and perhaps 10 for Severus. Why? Because Severus is my favorite character and he died. That is why I hated the last book. Please continue this heart breaking tale to its conclusion; I applaud you for daring to write a death fic. Those are the hardest to write and people can get really critical. Bravo!
person Meg
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea how I hope this turns out, to be totally honest. I want SS to be alive and this to all be a trick by V, but at the same time, your writing for this situation is as true to character as I've ever seen, and I kind of want to see how they end up if he is dead.

So confuzzled lol
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry. Really hard.
schedule October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You've make me cry, and it's been a while since I've cried with a fic. I'm sad for Harry, so much he has lost already, and for Severus, my dear Severus, who seems to cannot keep his happiness in life... =( I'll deeply hope that he is not realy dead, that it's been all a trick from Voldemort... but I'll not get my wishes up. Great story =)
person Luski
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i just read your update. It very nearly made me cry. You have quite a talent for inspiring emotion through your characters body language. Its sooo sad, but in some ways makes it so much more powerful.
I do hope for a sev return thingy, but tbh, i reckon this might just be that much better without us having a happy ending... don't know, very torn.
Lovely work, keep up i'll be looking out for the update, and will try and review again!
person qwerty
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I normally don't read any story where there's a major character death but the way you write this just draws me in. It's beautiful, tragically so.