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person MotekElm
schedule March 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great story. Even has some plot

person Jessssssssica
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
End? No! I want more!
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
At first I thought, not quite the way I expected after all that female dominance, but when I thought about it, it did make sense to change it, especially when you wanted them to stay together. The epilogue was the perfect touch because they kept each other 'under blackmail conditions' instead of just deciding they wanted to be together and have a happily ever after. I would have been disappointed if you'd done that, but I'm happy to say, I'm not disappointed at all. Thank you for sharing your story. :)
person circe266
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this surprisingly sweet and fluffy ending to your naughty tale. I hope to read more HG/DM & HG/LM stories from you. *fingers crossed*
person circe266
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved loved LOVED this chapter. Having Hermione dominate both Malfoys is incredibly hot. How characteristic of Lucius to use images of him dominating and 'punishing' Hermione in order to get his rocks off. Though I do love LM/HG pairings, the way you wrote this encounter as pure, sexy revenge, with no actual physical contact between them is quite perfect. Very, very well done.

I really like the way you depict Draco's growing trust in her. The last lines leave me very hopeful for a hot happy ending for these two. Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would love to know your secret about writing these scenes. I love your story it is the best i have read of this genre!!!
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Only one more chapter?

NOOO!

I eagerly await it, even if I wish it wouldn't end.
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! Love the way Hermione punished Lucius. Looking forward to another chapter!
person Elphaba
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
um I think my brain melted with that last chapter. Wow that was awesome!
person Vyper
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. It would be way hot if Lucious were to join Draco and Hermine, but it would be even better if Draco fell in love with her.