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oh wow this ritual sounds really interesting... i wonder what they are going to be like towards each other after the ritual... i like the way that you wrote this bc a lot of mate fics have them connected by their minds but it is assumed that they understand each others struggles i love that you have actually written a ritual in here that makes them face each others demons... oh and i love dracos guardian very fitting...i think that will definitely help them to understand each other... i soo cannot wait for the next chap:-)

That was a beautiful chapter. I liked your Dragon, he sounds viciously terrifying and wonderfully sweet at the same time. Loved him turning around to give them privacy, it made me giggle. I am curious what their reactions will be to the sharing of memories. Does that mean they only have their bodies left to share?

Looking forward to your next chapter.

This is so refreshing....... different ritual and tests............ Lovely!

Well that was a hot little interlude!!!!! Loved this chap and it was great to read them become comfortable with each other esp more intimately!!!! I soooo cannot wait for the next challenge!!! Wonderful job!!!

I've had a crap day, so thanks for making me smile (and melt a little)!

I can't remember if I have been reviewing. Being ill and on lovely drugs, tends to make me dopier than normal. Anyway. YAY me likey muchy. Wonderful story with great characterisation. Looking forward to reading more.

It's a soppy, sweet, awww so cute like puppies and kittens type of story. The sort I love to read and attempt to write. The few errors I've noticed haven't detracted from the overall enjoyment of the story. If you haven't already got a Beta I would suggest finding one. They are great at picking up the little errors that us authors can easily overlook.

Really enjoyed the mutual masturbation scene. It was written so sweetly without being crude and just 'I wanna fuck'. I find writing sex scenes incredibly difficult without it sounding like porn or really stupid.

Keep writing, I'll keep reading :D

very sweet :)

For a story where you said you didn't know where it was going from the start, you are doing a great job. Thank you and I look forward to the next step. HG4eva

Hello! I am enjoying your story and the fast updates, but it really irks me when writers don't know how to use commas properly. Other small grammatical errors I can take, but the comma issue really bugs me. Commas are pretty easy; you can look up how to use it easily on the net. Other than that, I really am enjoying this story.

yaaahhhh they kissed!!!!!!!!!!!! woo hoo.... ok so two more trials left and the mind one sounds like it may be tough... i love this story and i LOVE that you update so frequent i look forward to reading the next chap every other day.... thank you!!!!!