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for Ritual Seduction

by SarahRae

schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!!!!!!!!! And sooooooooooooooo romantic........
person C issi418
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written descriptive story has me fascinated. Thank you very much for your efforts. Cannot wait for it's completion.
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Simply lovely and sweet. Thank you. I seem to have missed the "issue" though. Can't wait to find out what it is. lol HG4eva
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Me likey :) I like the way you told a little of what happened during their mind meld thing. Looking forward to reading the next installment.
person Kimberly
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story line! Cannot wait for the next chapter!
person Smurphy
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yaahhh I was watching for your update everyday!!!! I cannot wait for the next chap:-) and I loved this one
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THEY ARE SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, he wanted her, he got her with no sort of conflict at all. No problems, no obstacles to overcome. No triumphs. As far as fluff goes... it's defintiely there. This is one of the smoothest wooings I've read in a while.
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet, I can't stop reading it (even though you really do need a beta to help with spelling/grammar). Very romantic.
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, now, what? I forgot what day it was when they started the bond. What did they share during it? What are their thoughts/feelings now that it's Thurs. afternoon?