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April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love Veela stories,but this looks just as good.I really hope you finish it.So many people start mate stories but never finish them.
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it!
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Please continue!
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like your plot bunny. Please continue.
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Of course it's worth continuing! Very interesting and I liked the fact that it was a long chapter. Can't wait to see how it turns out and you have my full attention. :D
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
I think that you have a unique story line here and I do look forward to reading more. There were several spelling and grammatical errors, begging the question, 'do you have a beta'?
If not, I would be happy to offer my services to quickly read over your story for proofing to catch some of these before you post. Just email if you would like me to do that.
I think that you have a unique story line here and I do look forward to reading more. There were several spelling and grammatical errors, begging the question, 'do you have a beta'?
If not, I would be happy to offer my services to quickly read over your story for proofing to catch some of these before you post. Just email if you would like me to do that.
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok Sarah you got my attention......... so what's next?
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes please continue I love any story where Hermione and Draco are drawn together through forces out of their control, it's always a good read if it's written well and you do.
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am hooked already! Can't wait til next chapter!