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by SpeedyTomato

schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS STORY.
person JanisJ
schedule July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the premise of this story.... I waited on starting it until there were more chapters and now I just want MORE!!!! :) Muses be with you, I hope to see more soon :)
person Darkless
schedule July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How fun is this 'what if' story? I've been enjoying it emmensely. Please say there will be more? Maybe a little angst/strife too? I'm such an angst whore. I really am. :P
schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is adorable and hot and I can't wait for another chapter. ^_^ hope there's another update soon!
schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I keep waiting for Harry's glamour to slip. lol. Can't wait for that one. Nice smut action. keep it coming.
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story looks like a good read, but I've gotta point out a few technical issues. In your list of bad guys, Khmer Rouge was the movement. Pol Pot was the name of the mass-murdering fuckhead (to quote Eddie Izzard). Also, and this is a big one, the word is "expatriate". Please please please go back and fix this.
person Eldorna
schedule June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So far I like it...one little nitpick....sorry....In chapter 1 you listed a bunch of tyrants: Hitler, Stalin etc... you listed Khmer Rouge, as well. Khmer Rouge was the name for the communist party in Cambodia- it's not a person... I believe you were thinking of Pol Pot the most famous party leader/dictator of the Khmer Rouge
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!! Soooo need chapter 9!!!
person ryo
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter. Loved it.
person sanda
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter