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this is hilarious!

 

 

*snorts* Trust Luna to fall for the boy's plan, but ruining it for said boy!! xDD

good stuff

This was actually quite entertaining; I think you had Luna down pat, and I loved Harry's last line. I think the story itself is well written, but it is extremely difficult to read because of the spacing issues. You need to separate your paragraphs better, and put the dialogue in its own paragraphs. Other than that, I quite liked it!

lol Poor sweet misguided Luna lol wow though