rate_review Reviews

I like the story, keep it up.

I'm really enjoying the concept you have going for this story. I hope you continue to right more chapters.

You won't believe my happiness when I saw that you updated recently!!!!! I have reread this story soooooooooooooooooo many times before, so I immediately noticed the difference. Please continue to update and complete this story; it is so good and different from any other fanfic. I will make sure to keep an eye out for it more often now that you have decided to come back to it. Great plot, update soon please!!!!!!!

great story

Hello! I just finished reading the 7 chapter. I liked this story very much and I just have to ask you if you plan on completing it.
I must say this is the most well written story I've found here. Most have very poor grammar/syntax/spelling, but this one not only has all that, it is genuinely well written. The plot is concise and interesting and I like how you portray your characters. It's the first time I've read wereHarry and I just expected it to be awful, but instead it's lovely!
Please let me know whether you will complete it or not so I can look out for the next chapters!!

This is an excellent story. Hope you keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more.

This was a cool chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Just a note on the editing: There are a couple places throughout the story where you leave off in the middle of a thought or sentence and the next part continues as another train of thought. You might want to look it over and fix any errors. Otherwise it was great.

Cosmyk

Another good chapter with much to think about. I can't guess where you are going with H&G new strain of werewolf--more predator? It was good to see Harry not run off into the night after hearing from Molly. I wish I could give you more of a thorough review, but to be honest, I rarely pay much attention to sentence structure and such unless it is just glaringly bad. I do tend to pay attention to spelling and you seem to do better than most. I am more interested in the content and so I have no complaints other then the frequency. Though I do understand classes and such take a lot of your time. You should get a better sense of priorities and spend your time on our entertainment (just kidding of course). Good luck with your lessons and thanks for taking the time to continue writing.

Another fine chapter. Poor Harry, having to hand in a sperm sample in addition to being felt up by Madame Pompfrey -- his first adult medical test. I am anxious to find out more about Ginny's changes, and what Madame Pompfrey has to say to the guardians. Hope real life doesn't hold back the next update too long.

Ch. 7

I really think this story is great. I appreciate how much detail you put into the specifics of becoming a werewolf; not only the physical effects but the emotional ones, too. Harry's guilt is so predictable, but I love how you portray his utter mortification when the adults are discussing his and Ginny's more primal urges. I'm looking forward to seeing how their lives are changed once the pair head back to Hogwarts. And the fact that you bring the politics into it, and that the adults are looking at all angles is great background stuff, too.