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for Come Slowly, Eden

by Lomonaaeren

schedule April 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
shite this is good
schedule July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly brilliant!! You could cut the tension between Draco and Harry with a knife and the end leaves you very satisfied and happy and sharing in their feeling of triumph. I loved it!! =)
person dannigurl
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was A-mazing! You're definitely one of my favorite authors because your stories are just....yum!
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely!!!!
person SP777
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn, girl...this was GOOD!!!

How come you can't do multi-chaptered stories like this! You had
me rooting for Team Harry against Team Draco. :-)

I'm glad you let your subtle humor shine through, it's been awhile.

All in all, this was fun!
person KadyRae
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
holy shit. FANTASTIC! one of my new favs, for sure!
person purple-er
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM

**Loved it**
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love how the competition between the two never ends!
Your writing is always awesome (I read all your fics...Changing of the Guard 3 times) You are making me enter strange realms where I want to use words like "squee!!!!" It getting to be disturbing really, to the point where all you have to do is post anything and I will faithfully read it no matter what. I mean really, you could just post a blank page under your name and I will go into raptures.... ridiculously embarrassing.
person polka dot
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like that they weren't changed by the war, very in character.
person 12blue12
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
holy fuck.. reading this at Starbucks was not a good idea... holy crap that was freaken hot. i just luv ur writing... and cant seem too get this naughty smile of my face lol. Tho the kinkiness to reading something this hot in a public setting gave it another level of excitement. though the guy sitting not far from me keeps giving me strange looks... i wonder if he can tell how aroused i am lol... i am breathing a little too rapidly and i cant seem to stop squirming on the couch im sitting on... at least the guys hot i guess... not some old perv. Anyway keep on writing cuz ur stuff is absolutely fantastic ;)