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for Beltane - Pt. 1

by alecto

person Void
schedule October 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really well-written stories and it deserves more reviews! I love how you've built up the attraction between the two characters, very well-done for a one-shot. The prose itself is marvelous, there's some great descriptions in there (I especially like the last line) and yet you haven't resorted to purple prose. All in all, a very good fic.
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I just read Beltane - Pt. 2 and I hope you continue these. Am curious to see what pairing you'll come up with next.
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Will there be a part 2, perhaps?
person kittycat30
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great story!
person paigeey07
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like it!!
person Jilliane
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM


Very nice!