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for Caged Bird Sings

by LiteraryBeauty

person Lynn
schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am totally in love with this story. Please keep it up. I love how slow it is; don't suddenly start rushing into the smut and ruin the suspense and tension. Both of them seem pretty in character, and I really like the atmosphere it creates. I'm anxiously awaiting your next update. : )
person Narcissas Sister
schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I may be off the mark but, It seems that by only giving us Hermiones point of view that we are stuck in the cell with her. Was that your intention? Snape seems to be warming up to her a bit in this chapter. However I think rather than keeping her safe he has more selfish resons for locking her up. As an avid reader I'm sure you'll let us know in the end. Great update and well done1!!!!
schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As always, a great chapter. Hope the next is very soon posted. :D
person Mmoirai
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeay! Another great chapter. Thank you.
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, loved :D
person Charlie
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly realistic, i just can't wait for more x
person tinkerbell
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story!I can't wait to find out what Severus wants to keep Hermione safe from.I hope you continue and don't stop at a few chapters(I hate it when that happens)
person tinkerbell
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would never have thought that Lastrange was behind the kidnapping!good twist!
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I hope the next comes soon. :)
person Mmajere
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
4/17 was way cool. OK, what happens next?