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for Caged Bird Sings

by LiteraryBeauty

schedule June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very intense. And I rarely say this about sex scenes because I normally am not impressed by them, but I thought the last one was very hot. I wonder if Snape will let Hermione take a more active role in his deceptions from now on...
person B
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This...this is absolutely beautiful. You're writing is perfect for this story and you've captured the character's so well. I just got to chapter 12 and I am dying to know what happens next. I've found my newest obsession. THANK YOU for writing this.
person dragon88
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story, the way in, which you have captured the characters and how they would react to said situation is great! The awkwardness, essence of stockholm sydrome and maybe something more is interesting to read. I really hope you carry this on, can't wait to read more :)
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very delicious chapter. Loved it!
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gorgeous! I absolutely can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's not hopeless.

Snape does seem a bit troubled by the fact that she stopped asking whether she could go home...

I am very happy that they both had a moment of relative freedom in that field.

Wonderful chapter, eagerly awaiting more :)
person Dayana
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I honestly love your story, I hope more will come soon
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I truly love this story
person LLC
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, LOVE it....
Just. Love it.

Well done.
person Berkid
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really wish eloquence was my forte, but alas it is not. Stockholm Syndrome has always facinated me, and I really 'get' the dynamics of what's happening between the two. The voyerism is extremely sexy, I love her obsession with his voice, and I love that thus has all taken -time-! The pacing of the story is perfect
(I really hate reading something that's all 'Oh hey I hate you JK LETS HUMP' if you'll excuse my awful analogy). I love this and I can't wait to finish it!!!!