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April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Parents found! Great chapter :)
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April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Glad to see it all went well. I was pleasently surprised to see Ron be so assertive when convincing Hermione's dad. It was a nice change of pace to what how Ron is normally acting in all the other fan fics. I wonder how much farther you are going to take this story and if you maybe have another one being thought up. Either way keep up the great work.
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
breathing a sigh of relief here...they found them! I think that's the most interesting part for me...of course, the 'smut' of true love is great, but am really digging the storyline here :)
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that they found her parents fairly quickly. I wonder if Hermione will be able to keep up with the act when they meet with her parents or if she will break down again. Can't wait for the next chapter to see the meeting. Keep up the great work.
Oh yeah...gotta love those bubblehead charms :)
Oh yeah...gotta love those bubblehead charms :)
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April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great update...but can't wait for them to finally get a GOOD lead! ;)
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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It is soooo nice seeing regular updates. Especially with the chapters being this funny. I wonder if Ron and Hermione will have to go through all or most of the numbers they are looking up or if they will get lucky and find Hermione's parents quickly. The one question I have about this chapter is this, how long did it take you to come up with all of those names Ron and Hermione called each other after they finished at the library for the day? Those deffinately had me laughing. Keep up the great work and update again soon please.
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April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:-D Plane sex! Though enlarging the toilet to do it is kinda cheating isn't it? You still need those commas and the dialogue some times uses oddly formal sounding phrases when you usually its more slangy. Still not bad at all.
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April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
another awesome, long chapter! loved it! can't wait for finding the parents...and more weasleys!
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April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. Loved how overly excited Mr. Weasley kept getting at all the different aspects of the airport. I was hoping Ron and Hermione would join the mile high club and you did not disappoint. Can't wait to see how long it takes them to find Hermione's parents and what her parents' reaction will be to the whole situation. Keep up the great work and update soon please.
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April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Like usual the story flowed nicely. Colin's funeral was nice, though I would have liked to hear Harry's speach. For Avanell, if you like Neville stuff I recommend reading 'It started with a kiss'(one of the other stories nutsaboutharry wrote). It is a great story focused on Neville that I for one certainly enjoyed. I always wondered how the golden trio would be received at Gringotts after they robbed and wrecked the place. Ron's comments about the goblin and the dragon were priceless. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.