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for Finding Wendell and Monica....

by NutsAboutHarry

person Daye
schedule May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on finishing this. Very nicely done, with an, although canon, rarely done pairing.
person Rosamund
schedule May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Darn...lost my first review...basically said that I agree, Hermione's parents might have concerns but after learning the story I think they would understand and be proud. Awesome story! I have enjoyed it very much :)
person Tim Deck
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great final chapter. You did a wonderful job wrapping up the loose ends for the fic. Sure there are more questions or events you could have written about, but nothing super important and it's nice to wonder what would happen sometimes. Thank you very much for dedicating this story to me and making me laugh many, many times while reading it. Keep up the great work and I look forward to any future fics you write.
person Steve
schedule May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are the best--I think I have read all over your stories MULTIPLE times.. I even get teary during some of the chapters=---Keep up the work I will always be a reader
person Tim Deck
schedule May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Such a great chapter that gave me a much needed laugh, again and again and again. I wish I could actually see pics of Ron skiing. The thought of him actually doing that is hilarious and you did a great job portraying that. I can't wait to see what sort of little mishaps might happen while they are snowboarding, or skiing again, or packing the house up. The next chapter seems to be filled with the promise of another good laugh. Keep up the great work and post again soon please.
person Rosamund
schedule May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great update! and can't wait for the next adventure you have promised ;)
person hpf2114
schedule May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. please keep it going. Full marks, oh and it would be nice to see Hermione get spanked.
person hpf2114
schedule May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Full marks
person Daye
schedule May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well I got caught up with this fic again. Just read chapters 5-7. Pretty good stuff and I like your handling of Ron and Hermione's relationship. But as Hermione pointed out once they got over the hurdle of actually finding her parents everything went a lot more smoothly. Seriously, I would have thought waking up on the wrong side of the planet and being told that your barely adult witch daughter extensively modified everything they knew would leave them a little... crankier, to say the least.

Liking Ron And Hermione's varied sex life though. Underwater oral sex sounds like a lot of fun :D
person Tim Deck
schedule May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I always love the bickering between Ron and Hermione. I can't wait to see how Ron does learning how to ski. That should be worth quite a few laughs. Keep up the great work and post again soon please.