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person stray523
schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm at chapter nine now and still really liking it............I hope all teh "donors" get all their childeren back. I wonder why the mothers keep dying tho, is it somethign wrong with the procedure so their bodies are rejecting the baby or something? I can't wait to read more!
person Kat
schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow I feel bad for the kids, but I have a feeling it's going to get worse as we find out what exactly happened to them. I'm happy you updated I was kinda worried you might have stoped. Thanks for the new chapter ^^
person stray523
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this months ago, but then didn't get online for a long while and forgot about it. Now that I've found it agin, I'm re-reading it from the beginning. I'm on chapter 4 so far and really like it! I can't wait to find out what's been happening to Harry and Draco's babies and how they've been getting put in other tummies, lol. I hope they get them all back and and end up a huge happy family and I hope Hermione's not in on what's going on, but I suspect she is. I'm disappointed in her already. Anyway, I'll be back to read as much as I can (and review again) tomorrow night! I also see Ron ending up dating Blaise even tho Charlie is, but Charlie and Blaise not braking up over it and I'd like to know more about the Snape/Remus/Nymphadora love triangle thing. Is Remus dating them both? Are they all dating each other? Did Remus and Tonks break up and they're just good friends and sharing parenting duties now? Gah, I can't wait to see what's going on! But for now I have to sleep. I'll have more questions to pester you with tiomorrow, lol.
Astraea
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
damn this is one crazy ass story. I love how one gril help to uncover an inteir consperacy. I hope they find perksons they need to die for what they did.
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow that is really good at first I wasn't so sure but by chapter 2 I was so hooked into I got caught up in 3 days hehe. I hope your write more and can't wait to see what happened to them all. Also will there possibly be any drarry smut I love it and since this story actually has a plot I think it would be good ;) Can't wait till the next chapter -hugs- thanks again :D
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I just started reading PP-SD today, only a few hours ago actually, and I'm downright hooked! It's not often we see Hermione in any way shape or form being the "bad guy", even if she is just a cover she totally knew what she was doing wasn't right. I love male/male pairings (especially Draco/Harry) but most of them are all smut and no plot. That's ok some of the time, but when the grammar and spellings are so awful it makes your head hurt and you're stuck reading "OOOoooHHH Harry i ned ur bod" and other lines like that it really is nice to read such an original story such as this. I'm truly a fan of this tale and I hope you continue on as you have and stay true to your plot. The twists and turns are unexpected, yet not far fetched.

Thanks for putting such a great story out here! *fingers crossed* hoping for more chapters soon! :D
person hup
schedule October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was awe inspiring. I can't wait to see more of what happens next. Any chance the little blonde boy found in the MacNair house is Lucius and James' grandson? if so that would be awesome.
person tsukinotora
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and just read to your most recent update. I have to say I was so glad that Hermione was not the ring ledar. When I relized that she was involed I was like "That bitch!" and I felt bad for Ron, Harry, and Draco I know they where going to be hurt the most. And then when I relizes she wasn't the head i was like "thank goodness." But now I just want Pansy killed and stufed for what she did to all of thouse babys. I hope everyone involved is right by her side for the death sentence. Expeacully that guy who hurt Tonks even if it's only for hurting Tunks.

On a lighter note I can not want to meet Harry's and Draco's helf sister. I am looking forwored to it. And Terry's baby can't wait for that. I bet it'll be cute. Oh and why cant Harry, Draco and all the kiddies just stay at Malfoy manor? It has alot of room. Lucius and Narcissa woild love the compuny and Harry and Draco could use the help. They could use there old house as a get-a-way spot. Just saying. Any way can't wait to see what's next.
person Jennifer
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How much longer do we have to wait until something is done about Pansy? And the rest of the children, are they gonna find them all, and keep them? I foresee Malfoy Manor filled to the brim with children.... Harry's children... Draco's children... Maybe they will even find all the other stolen children of the other "donors" so that they can all go to their fathers... Is Terry's baby going to be okay? I know that there were multiple embryos implanted, but how many will actually survive? I hope they get two, a little boy and a little girl, just so that they have their family.

I really loves the fact that you made Lucius more accepting of Harry now and he's going to be helping Harry with getting his revenge on Pansy and the other asses who destroyed Harry's daughters. There is nothing wrong with little witches... In fact, they are stronger than some of the wizards you come across....

I'm also glad you had Draco finally meet his twins. At least now he knows that there are also more children out there for them to find... I wonder how many of them will be staying with the Malfoys and how many with the Malfoy-Potters.

Update soon, please, i love this story, and all the other stories you have going right now.