rate_review Reviews

Very nice read

Thought I liked your story very much, I was wondering where you came from because with myself being scottish I can honestly say that there is no hate between the scots and Irish maybe between the Irish and English and Scots and English but none between Scots and Irish

No, this isn't at all the story you outlined to me, but I like this one better. Admittedly, Percy isn't a character I give much thought to at all, and I loathe Hermione in any way, shape, or form, but I did like this story. Percy and Hermione together is totally believable; in fact, they're almost made for each other, certainly in the way you write them. There were several things I liked about this story. I liked Patroclus and his mutterings. I liked Bob. I liked Percy too, especially his self awareness, and the brutally honest way he acknowledges his own shortcomings. I liked it that Ron cheated on Hermione. Usually, its the other way round, she cheats on him because she's come to the realisation that he really is a dolt, and God I hate that! How Ron is always maligned in fanfic. He's no peach here, cheating on his wife, with his sister-in-law to boot, but you didn't bash him, so I liked that. The thing I liked best of all though, was the no frills way you described Hermione's body. I don't like Hermione, I never will, no matter how hard you try to make me like her, but I do like the way you refuse to "HermioneSue" her. I don't like her, but I love your realistic portrayal of her, and that's why I'll always read your Hermione. Good job this, but then, it always is when you write it.

Marvelous! Absolutely marvelous, loved every word. Thanks so much!

(I'm in absolutely no condition to count P words at the moment, but will do so ASAP.)

Percy, Percy, Percy, please don't play with the Polyjuice?