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I loved the story so far! Please write more!!

Thank you for your honest review :) ... I was hoping to get accross that sometimes in life things do happen very fast, she is very aroused by Snape and fears her marriage was a mistake ... I'll get another few chapters on and hopefully you will like it again .. Cheers, Lady T

ok I really loved chapter 1-3 but chapter 4 seems flawed. Hermiones fighting the urge yet makes out with snape....then comes to his letter and ready to play wife? or kisses his cheek after the apology? tucks his hair behind his ear? this chapter seems rushed and I think thats why I dislike it. She feels bad but immediately that inner conflict is forgotten and shes ready to play house. Or not really upset that hes planned to have her husband busy......anyway it just went from tantalizing and subtle building of their attraction that flowed really well to this rushed one(as in a much quicker pace than the last chapters). Your very talented; this chapter just seems slightly out of sink of the others.

Interesting. I look forward to reading more.
Mare