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by Lomonaaeren

schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How did she know to go under the necklace? How did she find him?
person angelmuziq
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How dare Pansy! lol. She must be real stupid to threaten a Veels's chosen. I hope Draco tears them both a new one! I wonder how Harry will react to Draco going 'mad.' Update soon. I love it!
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I so hope we get to see Draco kicking some ass, especially Pansy's. I would think though that Harry would be able to overpower Pansy easily given how powerful he is, like putting up a barrier or blasting Pansy away from him before she could get the words out to cast a spell. I'm very eager and anxious to see how this plays out. Oh.. also since Draco's chosen is having his life threatened, isn't he legally allowed to kill her in order to protect his chosen? Can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
person SP777
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #29...

1. Did this Russell & Pansy JUST step off the bus for the
ignorant AND retarded ass???

How stupid was that!!! O_o

Give them one for me Draco!!! *smacks palm*

2. You know, you better give Harry & Draco a DAMN
good freakin' honeymoon, when all this crap is over with.

3. ...with all this talk about Laurent, we won't be seeing
him no time soon in this story, are we?
person Minue
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if that is something Narcissa and Lucius would do - creating a situation where Draco can kill the two idiots without repercussions.
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Eeeep!

Draco is unleashing the Veela!

I love it!

This is about the most evil cliffhanger so far. I am giddy for more!!
person polka dot
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well that was stupid. Harry's an auror so now Pansy just bought her and her intended a trip to Azkaban. But then again they will get their family reunion too.
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
again wow, how the heck does pansy have an invisibility cloak and that was just plain downright devious on their part lol clever but devious. so whold time the rustling was pansy getting closer to harry aint that a bitch sry for the language but its just crazy and messed up. and now we have to see a pissed off veela-draco and that my friend i wish not to see, okay maybe i want to see it but i hope for harry's sake he's not taken aback by it. hell he might join the fight :D i cant wait for the next chapter its sure to be worthwhile :D thanks for updating :3
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can you stop with the dang cliff hangers!? You might find them useful but they are only annoying. Finish the whole chapter THEN post it! geeze.
schedule June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 29!!! Will he keep Draco out?