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for Veela-Struck

by Lomonaaeren

schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i am very pleased with this update and as far as torturing pansy, you did a great job. what's worse, having a few bruises and a trip to azkaban or a permanent reminder that if you cross a veela of any kind, let alone draco, you will suffer the consequences and in my opinion she got off lightly, very lightly, she better thank harry next time they meet lol. and poor misguided idiotic russell he should have left well enough alone, tsk tsk ah well his fault :D cant wait for the next update
and oh on a side note harry i am very proud of :D even though at points he wanted to make a quick beeline out of there he held his ground and that is a MAJOR improvement, even if it is a small one he is getting better and that's all we can ask for a baby step at a time. WOOT GO HARRY :3
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is OMFG! You left us such a big cliffhanger! I was so suprised when Pansy came out from under an invisability cloak, nice twist. I can't wait to see what Draco does! Thank you for writing such a captivating story

person NightLo
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...Love does make people become more stupid, and I cannot find a better example than Pansy...BTW, how will Harry react this time, being the one protected instead harm by veela...would this change his opinion?
person Fel
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wait, wait, wait... Pansy went to school with Draco, was his chosen, and somehow didn't anticipate that he'd react like this? She really is that stupid. I say she deserves whatever she's getting for having a bad plan - Slytherins are meant to be sneakier than that. Know thy enemy and all.

And yay for Harry having fun dreams again. That'll make things a little easier... if D's reaction in this doesn't completely bugger it up.
person solerine
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO! why did you stop...
person W
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, I thought about this story for the better part of my cources this day and to be honest, I could've stayed at home because I can't remember a single thing of them...

I was just thinking: If I were Draco, I would probably be almost _glad_ that Pansy decided to threaten Harry, because that would give me the opportunity to fight someone who's frightening him. And because Draco promised not to hurt Laurent, Pansy could be a likely candidate for some very nasty curses or even something that only Veela can do^^ Draco could even use the Allure! But I don't know if Harry could forgive him if he did...
You know, I'm looking quite forward to what you have in store for us *grins evily*
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH GODS! Don't let me wait to long... I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!!! EVIL INCARNATE!!!!!
person qwerty
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooo! Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope Harry won't be terrified of Draco after this!
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM

OMG! I can't believe she would do that, now the real action starts and I can't wait for the next chapter! update again soon.
person W
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!

Please, don't let us wait that long for the next chapter, I'm already dying out of nervousness! I sooo love your Draco, I want to see him go wild about Harry, and let me just add: I definitelly dislike Pansy, although her reasoning is quite sound.

So, I'm begging you: Please, write as fast as you can, it's really trying to think of all the possible outcomes of this scene...

PS: You are definitelly the MASTER of cliffhangers... *starts pouting heavily*