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for Veela-Struck

by Lomonaaeren

person Melibea
schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! such an amazing ride... I loved this story since the very beggining... and I hope to read a new one from you... I particularly loved the way that the characters interacted among them... very human in a very magical world... they didn
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You write a really good story which made me think of a lot the past days.
Let us read more soon. :)
sincere
Tiger
person qwerty
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love seeing how Harry is progressing. And I especially loved the last line because the imagery really stood out to me: "that sound that filled the air with the motion of light and the shimmer of bells." Beautiful.
Keep going!
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
my favorite chapter so far :D it was so full of warm and fuzzy moments and even sone light banter but overall i enjoyed it and yesh draco finally hears those magical words and i bet it also loosened something in harry as well to finally let go and allow draco to help him. waiting eagerly for the next chapter and yes auror work will probably take a back seat now that draco's "practice sessions" are in the works X3

schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finally getting some. Happy veela for
everyone!!
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A little fangirl squee erupted inside of me when I read this chapter...Wonderful, as always, and as always I cannot wait for more, even if there isn't that much more left.
person SP777
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #33..

I don't know WHAT it is about seeing Draco go
into Veela mode, with the crooning & screeches,
but but it just makes me freakin' giddy and go
into an 'Awww...' moment.

It's just that he is SO protective and wanting
to please Harry.

I'm glad to see they've gone a step further than
what they have and I hope one day to see Harry take
at least ONE bite of food w/o the spells.

..and I'm glad to see Harry bite the bullet and take
the initiative in making the first move with Draco,
hopefully that opened the door for something.

Anyway, good job on this chapter. :-)
person angelmuziq
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a darn good chapter! Makes me jealous of a fictional character-Harry of course. lol. Your excellent writing skills and your portrayal of Draco make me wish that Veela were real. He is just too seductive and kind for his own good. He's perfect for Harry and I cant wait to see how they end up. I dont need to tell you to keep up the good work because all your work is good so I'm just going to say Keep It Up! because your fics brighten my day. I'll miss this fic when its finished. Thanks and update soon!
schedule June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I had thought that I would be frustrated with Harry's progress but you write beautifully, with just the right amount of realism to make this story work.