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for Veela-Struck

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #3..

1. Of all the endings of a chapter I've seen, this one
made want to laugh & smile..and if I wasn't such a reserved
person I would have. ;-)

I felt happy for Draco.

2. Veela Struck...is that a term for a sickness/ailment caused
by Veela?
person sanda
schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loooved :D
person fudge
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm excited to see where you take this!
person paigeey07
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well we know harrys answer!! Yay!!!!
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, once again. I like the pace that you're setting with the plotline...although, I admit that it's torturous to wait for the next chapter!
person polka dot
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought about Draco looking like Rumpelstiltskin in that last little bit. I can't even imagine the wings.
person Amiyom
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop this Harry. He is fierce and yet horribly weak at the same time.
person Sarah
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh man im so glad u update this! i remember reading the first chappie ages ago and never seeing it updated. glad u finally came around to doing it :) plz update again soon!
person sanda
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter