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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Draco singing to the tune of ''I'm walking on sunshine'': 'I'm walking
on eggshells..w-e-e-ll..I'm walking in eggshells..w-e-e-ll..and it
doesn't feel GOOD!
Harry: What are you singing?
Draco: Oh nothing. *sigh* You know I get the feeling Lomona is
going to make this hard for me in this chapter.
Harry: Well, she does have a tendency to have you go through changes.
But, don't worry, it'll be good, halfway through the story..you know
she'll drag it out before she puts her characters..and readers..out of
their misery. *looks at author*
Lomonaaeren: *points at herself* Who me??? I would NEVER do that.
^_~
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*ahem* about #5....
Sorry, got carried away up there.
O-kay, Harry has a 'panic room'! I liked that..AND he gets to cut loose,
unfortunately it's because of that waste of oxygen that resides in Azkaban.
You just got to let Draco have a go at him! Please [and I don't say please often]!
But, then again, I think Harry needs to confront him in the future and
personally, I have NUTHIN' against the maiming of violators.
All in all, their little lunch date was...sweet. I kind of wish it HAD been
in the park. Brings to mind another song.
Glad to see Harry taking those 'baby steps', you just can't keep a strong
man down. :-)
Speaking of strong men, whenever you write Harry this way, I always visualize
him with a chiseled chin, strong piercing green eyes, a muscular hard body,
layered hair that looks like it was attacked by the wind & shoulder length,
5'11'', devilish smile...and let me stop!
I won't mention voice.... :-p
..and nuff said until next time.
on eggshells..w-e-e-ll..I'm walking in eggshells..w-e-e-ll..and it
doesn't feel GOOD!
Harry: What are you singing?
Draco: Oh nothing. *sigh* You know I get the feeling Lomona is
going to make this hard for me in this chapter.
Harry: Well, she does have a tendency to have you go through changes.
But, don't worry, it'll be good, halfway through the story..you know
she'll drag it out before she puts her characters..and readers..out of
their misery. *looks at author*
Lomonaaeren: *points at herself* Who me??? I would NEVER do that.
^_~
***************
*ahem* about #5....
Sorry, got carried away up there.
O-kay, Harry has a 'panic room'! I liked that..AND he gets to cut loose,
unfortunately it's because of that waste of oxygen that resides in Azkaban.
You just got to let Draco have a go at him! Please [and I don't say please often]!
But, then again, I think Harry needs to confront him in the future and
personally, I have NUTHIN' against the maiming of violators.
All in all, their little lunch date was...sweet. I kind of wish it HAD been
in the park. Brings to mind another song.
Glad to see Harry taking those 'baby steps', you just can't keep a strong
man down. :-)
Speaking of strong men, whenever you write Harry this way, I always visualize
him with a chiseled chin, strong piercing green eyes, a muscular hard body,
layered hair that looks like it was attacked by the wind & shoulder length,
5'11'', devilish smile...and let me stop!
I won't mention voice.... :-p
..and nuff said until next time.
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I like the manner in which they're building trust.
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aurors with an ax to grind, just like muggle cops.
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aww how sweet *dopey grin* Draco really feels for harry and it shows so much in this chapter that its just amazing when i read of that much focused attention someone has on someone without succumbing to their own desires. well anyway i hope u update as soon as u can.
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! The boys are killing me though! Dancing around each other like that! I love how protective they are of each other-- so cute! Nice job!
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for more!
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #4....
Man, talk about walking on pins & needles and cut glass AND hot
coals! O_o
How is Draco going to work this out???
..maybe I'm jumping ahead of the game, BUT couldn't Harry REMEMBER
how he treated Draco before he told Harry what he was? Then, they
can work around that.
Man, talk about walking on pins & needles and cut glass AND hot
coals! O_o
How is Draco going to work this out???
..maybe I'm jumping ahead of the game, BUT couldn't Harry REMEMBER
how he treated Draco before he told Harry what he was? Then, they
can work around that.
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So hard for both of them!
I think there's one thing about which Harry is wrong. The change has already begun. It started when he accepted Draco'd offer. Or maybe even before that, when he stayed friends with Draco in spite of knowing about his Veela blood.
Wonderful chapter!
I think there's one thing about which Harry is wrong. The change has already begun. It started when he accepted Draco'd offer. Or maybe even before that, when he stayed friends with Draco in spite of knowing about his Veela blood.
Wonderful chapter!
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be some of the best reading material on the planet!! How is it that you haven't published your work? I would buy this book in it's entirety, and any other story you have that goes along with it! This is very well written and I can't wait to see more!